
When viewing an adaptation of a book, I always try to keep the source material out of my mind, but damn that can be hard sometimes. It was especially hard when watching HBO’s Game of Thrones, the first adaptation of a series that I am currently engrossed in (deep into the third volume, A Storm of Swords, at this point). This is not a preferable method for reviewing an adaptation, but since I can’t get the book out of my mind, I’ll use it. Don’t worry. I work at a higher level of criticism than this old staple of disappointed (usually Harry Potter) fans: “They cut out my favorite part!”
In fact, my biggest criticism of the adaptation has little to do with the book. I’ve previously written about the importance of tone and mood when it comes to fantasy, but I have to harp on it again. The adaptation of Game of Thrones does a terrific job with characterization, but it’s not always successful at creating a sense of time and place, one of the most important tasks to accomplish when dealing with fantasy. A fantasy world does not have to be realistic, but it has to feel like a distinct place that exists in the mind. Peter Jackson did this incredibly well in his Lord of the Rings trilogy, the current high point for cinematic fantasy, as did Alfonso CuarĂ³n in Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, the best of the Harry Potter films.
HBO’s Game of Thrones only occasionally accomplishes this. I appreciate that it slows down for dialogue scenes instead of rushing through the plot, but I wish that it wouldn’t skip creating a sense of atmosphere. A lot of the dialogue works, especially the scenes between King Robert and Ned Stark. They help to provide the series with a sense of history as the characters reminisce over the rebellion that they led several years before. However, we never really get a sense of King’s Landing as a place. I’m not even sure we get an establishing shot of the city. The show almost approaches Attack of the Clones territory as an epic fantasy dominated by scenes of people talking in offices. I’m not saying that it should have fewer dialogue scenes, but that the dialogue scenes should help to establish the location. There should be more scenes like the one where Littlefinger walks with Ned through his courtyard and points out all of the spies working there. One of the masterstrokes of storytelling in the book was to have Arya wander through the poorer streets of King’s Landing late in the story. This does a brilliant job of making the city feel like a real place, and it sets up the terrific dual-layered story structure of A Clash of Kings. In the show, this sequence is truncated to about 30 seconds. It’s not a flaw because it deviates from the book, but it wastes a good opportunity to create some atmosphere. Of course, at that point in the story, there isn’t much time for creating atmosphere.

But creating a better sense of atmosphere and mood doesn’t have to take time. Lighting alone can radically alter the mood of a scene. Far too many of the sets in Game of Thrones feel like, well, sets, particularly the Frey’s Castle and the streets of King’s Landing. Think of how effective the scenes at the Wall are, especially the scene in the last episode when Jon’s friends catch him in the woods as he tries to desert. Look at the way the scene seems to only be lit by the torches, creating a nice interplay of light and shadow that heightens the tension. That’s atmosphere. That’s mood. The show also makes very good use of setting for the scenes in the Eyrie (well set up by a nice establishing shot form the valley below). The throne room provides the location for one of the weirdest character entrances I’ve seen (isn’t that boy a bit old for that milk?) and a duel around a large hole in the floor. The set piece conclusion of the penultimate episode also has a great deal of suspense, and the last episode winds up with a lot of tension as we see various characters moving off to their storylines in the next season (I loved seeing the Night’s Watch riding out under the Wall at the end).
But unfortunately, the show suffers from the same flaw as the book: the story spends far too much time spinning its wheels. There isn’t enough of a driving story engine. The central mystery behind Jon Arryn’s death and the attempt on Bran’s life is compelling, but the story doesn’t spend enough time propelling that thread. There are a few too many dialogue scenes that don’t really add much to story, particularly the ones that set up characters for the next book. Yes, I know that Lancel Lannister and Theon Greyjoy become important in Clash of Kings, but they’re not terribly important in Game of Thrones. They should spend a little more time with Robb Stark because he is much more important for this story than Theon. As in the book, there isn’t quite enough momentum as the story moves toward the conclusion, and the war begins. The show actually improves on this a little by making the Lannister plans (the scene between Tywin and Jaime is terrific, not least because of the symbolism involved with Tywin gutting a stag) and the Stark plans a little clearer. I assume that budgetary constraints are the reason why we’re robbed (no pun intended) of any battle scenes (which makes me a little worried for the Battle of Blackwater in Clash of Kings). And although the Daenerys storyline has a great payoff, it proceeds in fits and starts and mostly just meanders around, just like in the book.

There’s a lot to like in Game of Thrones. I love the opening title sequence, and I can’t decide whether I want the creators to keep it for next season or see what they can come up with next. Peter Dinklage is terrific as Tyrion, and young Maisie Williams makes for a great Arya. Her storyline is the best part (with competition from Jon and Tyrion) of Clash of Kings, and I’m really looking forward to how the next season handles it (this season already makes an enormous improvement over the rather cruel way the book leaves off with Arya’s story). Sean Bean is so good as Ned Stark that he provides HBO with an interesting problem. The center of the show’s marketing was based around Sean Bean and he was the main reason why a lot of people tuned in. Just like in the book, we like him so much that we can’t believe it when he dies in the penultimate episode. I hope Tyrion, Arya and Jon will be enough to make people watch the next season, but maybe HBO will use the casting of Stannis and maybe Ser Davos as a way of bringing in some big names. As if marketing has any effect on the quality of the show.
I’m not entirely sure I trust my reaction to Game of Thrones. I read the book much too recently, and I’m still reading the others in the series. Maybe I’ll feel better about it if I revisit the series after the books have faded a little from my mind (hopefully this happens before next season). I will say that there aren’t many TV shows that I watch regularly, but with Game of Thrones, I watched, enjoyed and highly anticipated each episode. This doesn’t happen often, so consider yourself lucky, HBO. And did I mention that I’m hooked for next season? How could I not be?














